My ishtory - part A1
This is a continuation of part A (Not part B). If you havent read it, well then here it is... go ahead.. I'm waiting.
Another quick gust of wind. It blew out the candle. She stood there alone, motionless, truly in fear, her brows tensely knitted. The shrill sound of the wind blew in the distance, as if meaning to say something to her. Her mind was a wreck now. Her chest heaved heavily. Panic. Was her head messing with her ? "Calm down, you're thinking too much", she told herself. But she couldn't stop thinking about him now...
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Another quick gust of wind. It blew out the candle. She stood there alone, motionless, truly in fear, her brows tensely knitted. The shrill sound of the wind blew in the distance, as if meaning to say something to her. Her mind was a wreck now. Her chest heaved heavily. Panic. Was her head messing with her ? "Calm down, you're thinking too much", she told herself. But she couldn't stop thinking about him now...
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4 Comments:
Hey make it a loong post makes fr easier reading
or better still post the entire story at one go.
DC: lol.. I dont *have* the entire story with me. I make it up bit by bit. Just hope to establish something using the separate part A and part B streams.
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Comeon i know ur writing the story in bits and pieces.
but well my patience doesnt really hold if u really want to know the truth.
some of the passages were astoundingly lovely.
finish it finish it finish it sooon.
Good, but too short. Atleast make it as long as part B.
Right now it reminds me of the Mandrake or Phantom strips that used to run in the newspaper for over an year before reaching conclusion.
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